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I hhope this isnt spamming but i am making a new song and its not tht long so far but what do you think?
Congradulaaations your a loser!
Like a bone-head, thinking for the very first tiiiiiiiime,
Cant even, keep one thing to his mind,
you wounder why he got in F in chemestry,
and is 22 but still in Jr. high
any suggestions to help me out with the song?
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umm help with the tune? cant amagin it poperly without a tune
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Get a guitar player in the background *hint hint*

. What sorta music is it aswell? Sounds kind of Punk Rock from the lyrics I can read there.
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Zero you must be pretty good at music bcause thts wut its supposed to sound like.
was considering a band a while a go...hmm... ill let ya know zero
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Thought it was Punk. Im looking for some guitar lessons at the mo. Im might pay the guitar shop a visit down town and ask.
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Great just need a drummera nd a good name
say carl, what kinda guitar you got?
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A Stagg, copy of a Fender Strat. Not very good but, if I get better im going to invest in getting a Fender Strat which cost around £400.
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They sound somewhat early punkish, now all you need is a Crazy Tune so you can rock out. Oh, yeah, maybe go for a metallish thing, you know, like with scissor kicks and high-pitched screams of "Ow!" and "Yeah!"
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Woah, don't you read the rules? This is the 3rd topic you've bumped when I've said not to bump. And this thread ended almost a year ago..
This one I'm gonna keep open cus I'll be posting some more lyrics for feedback later.