I am righting a story about PSO I am only 12 so there are a few spelling mistakes but here it is but i only have 4 chapters done.
PHANTASY STAR ONLINE
Chapter 1,The Hilde Bear.
My story of phantasy star online stars with a ramar humar and a fomar 3 basic chracters.After a boring spech of the princpal Ranger Blade,Hunter Max and Force Galdof are walking in the forest and a Hilde Bear jumps at them and attacks them.Max runs and attacks the bear he hits it once or twice then is wacked away Blade strats to shot it a few times then the bear uses fire and hits him away so then Galdof uses ice about 5 times and then is hit.Blade gets up and uses his Photon Blast the Hilde Bear is dead Blade helps Max and Galdof up and says time to feed are mags.
Chapter 2,The Man In The Guild.
After our heros feed there mags they went back to Pioneer 1.They saw a shady chracter in the hunters guild.Max strated to talk to him so Blade and Galdof went to do a quest when they got back Max asked them could Timmy (the shady man) come to kill the dragon with them.Blade said yes and Galdof said him hes noting but troble.So they voted Max and Blade said yes Galdof said no. Timmy said 2 to 1 lets go.After fighting for 10 hours the killed the dragon he dropped 300000 meseta Timmy grabed it and ran Galdof said I told u so.They ran after Timmy so they found his body next to a mon-nest he droped they money so Blade said 100000 each Galdof and max said fine with me.
Chapter 3,Killing The Sea
After kill the they told the princpal what Timmy had done Timmy lost his hunters lincense.Then they told the princpal about the dragon he gave them premission to enter the cave the were fighting for 2 days finally they got to the boss Galdof was sea sick so Max and Blade had to do it them shelfs but De Rol Let was to strong they need Galdof to stop Galdot from geting sick they gave him a blind fold so he could not sea the water.Blade was shoting De Rol Let wile Max was aiming Galdof arms at De Rol Let so he could use thunder after 5 hours of fighting they finally killed De Rol Let when they got back to Pioneer 1 they wre robbed by another gang of hunters a ramar a humar and a fomar they only tock there mesata.Blade told they princpal and the princpal said find them kill them.
Chapter 4,He's Back
After telling the princpal about De Rol Let Are 3 heros went to the hunter guild for a quest.Blade picked out one they all agread on.They strated to talk to a ranger lv16 named Blake the quest was in the mines Blake did not tel them what to do so he came along with them the went mine 1,2 and 3 it tock about 3 days final the reached a load of red lazers Blake siad go on in u go they went in And they saw De Rol Let this time more powerful then ever the plain was Blade and Max hit him and Blake pointed Galdofs arms at him so he could use magic this time thet made shour he was dead so blade blow him up with an inferano bazooca.
PS:I will add new chapters when there done.
PHANTASY STAR ONLINE
Chapter 1,The Hilde Bear.
My story of phantasy star online stars with a ramar humar and a fomar 3 basic chracters.After a boring spech of the princpal Ranger Blade,Hunter Max and Force Galdof are walking in the forest and a Hilde Bear jumps at them and attacks them.Max runs and attacks the bear he hits it once or twice then is wacked away Blade strats to shot it a few times then the bear uses fire and hits him away so then Galdof uses ice about 5 times and then is hit.Blade gets up and uses his Photon Blast the Hilde Bear is dead Blade helps Max and Galdof up and says time to feed are mags.
Chapter 2,The Man In The Guild.
After our heros feed there mags they went back to Pioneer 1.They saw a shady chracter in the hunters guild.Max strated to talk to him so Blade and Galdof went to do a quest when they got back Max asked them could Timmy (the shady man) come to kill the dragon with them.Blade said yes and Galdof said him hes noting but troble.So they voted Max and Blade said yes Galdof said no. Timmy said 2 to 1 lets go.After fighting for 10 hours the killed the dragon he dropped 300000 meseta Timmy grabed it and ran Galdof said I told u so.They ran after Timmy so they found his body next to a mon-nest he droped they money so Blade said 100000 each Galdof and max said fine with me.
Chapter 3,Killing The Sea
After kill the they told the princpal what Timmy had done Timmy lost his hunters lincense.Then they told the princpal about the dragon he gave them premission to enter the cave the were fighting for 2 days finally they got to the boss Galdof was sea sick so Max and Blade had to do it them shelfs but De Rol Let was to strong they need Galdof to stop Galdot from geting sick they gave him a blind fold so he could not sea the water.Blade was shoting De Rol Let wile Max was aiming Galdof arms at De Rol Let so he could use thunder after 5 hours of fighting they finally killed De Rol Let when they got back to Pioneer 1 they wre robbed by another gang of hunters a ramar a humar and a fomar they only tock there mesata.Blade told they princpal and the princpal said find them kill them.
Chapter 4,He's Back
After telling the princpal about De Rol Let Are 3 heros went to the hunter guild for a quest.Blade picked out one they all agread on.They strated to talk to a ranger lv16 named Blake the quest was in the mines Blake did not tel them what to do so he came along with them the went mine 1,2 and 3 it tock about 3 days final the reached a load of red lazers Blake siad go on in u go they went in And they saw De Rol Let this time more powerful then ever the plain was Blade and Max hit him and Blake pointed Galdofs arms at him so he could use magic this time thet made shour he was dead so blade blow him up with an inferano bazooca.
PS:I will add new chapters when there done.
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. ummm, some tips, you could add dialouge (however its spelled) or perhaps an Introduction and/or Prolouge just to make it a bit more story like 
. Its look great though
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