My first Fanfic

[Deadly Zero]

Yuo bad person you, shame on you!

Meeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeh you can use Ria if you wish, I don't mind. If you do I would say her personally basically is slightly cold, not the sort of person to be hyper or have much of a laugh. Prefers being a lone wolf really. Ah phooey I hope that's correct.

Blah blah now I head to bed T_T

i will use Ria.
Ok i have 4 people with one more to be brought in by poo fly, so i will start on the story now.

[Deadly Zero]

heres the first chapter. Its a little rusty and needs improving but ill let you all see it anyway.

Chapter one:The past
No!! *Yells Iori as a man in a darkened cloak swings at a boy near him* NO IVAN!!!!!!! *Yells Iori as he helplessly watches his friend get slayed by an assasin* Iori then wakes up from the dream as his alarm clock goes off*
Oh not that dream again. Why do I keep having it?? What does it mean?? anyways I must get going as i have a tornament to fight in today. *Iori then begins to run out the door towards the big tournament.Iori then starts to speed up drastically* "Huff..Huff... I cant be late or I'll be removed from the big tourney."
*As Iori runs around a corner he bumps into a woman and knock her to the ground *Sorry i didnt mean to knock you down. *Says Iori as he gives the woman his hand to help her to her feet. Then the woman looked at Iori with cold eyes and hit him with a zonde and said* You deserve that you idiot!! Cause of you I may be late to enter the big tournament!! *As Iori recovers from the blow he looks at the time and starts to head for the tournament again*
"Finally im here." *Says Iori as he goes to sign up for the tournament* "I wonder who my first opponent will be?? *Iori overhears someone talking*
"I hear that that this year we have some really powerful people in the tourney." *says one little boy* "Yeah I heard that the Great Dark Magician will be here to fight!! I hope i can get an autograph from him!!" *Says the second boy*
Hmmm Whos Dark Magician?? *Thinks Iori* Ive never heard of him before...

[Grave_Guardian]

An excellent start Deadly. I could nag u about grammer, but I am not one to talk so with that said keep it up. (If u still need another character I will see if can get DARKMATTER to give u his charater details, don't expect much though."

[Deadly Zero]

Chapter two Part-1:The big Tournament
*As Iori beats his first opponent he gets a glimpse of DM* "O so thats the legendary mage.. he looks very powerful... hey what the?!?!
*Iori was then thrown to the ground and punched relentlessly in the stomach* "Damn i thought i beat you already!! *Yells Iori as he kicks the opponent in the face*
*Iori then dashes at him and punches him with flaming fists* How do you like that!! *Yells Iori as he is declared the winner of the match*
Ohh that feels good *Says Iori as he sets his chair to massage his sore body* So thats who DM is. I bet i could beat him hands down in a fight. *Says Iori as he starts getting cocky* My next match is tomorrow so I might as well get some sleep. *Iori wakes up the next morning. He heads for the door but something catches his eyes* Whats that *Iori asks himself as he heads toward the window to see* Isnt that the girl I knocked down yesterday getting mugged by some thugs??
It is *Yells Iori as he rushes out to help her, but when he gets there she is unharmed and every thug is on the ground paralyed by her spells*
Whew you are good with magic. Anyways im Iori who are you? *The girl replies* I am the Lone Wolf Ria and i am your next opponent in the tourney so ill see you there and i will wipe the floor with you. *Says Ria as she walks toward the Tournament and blows a kiss at her next victim*
Damn she seems to be very powerful so I'll have to be quick on my feet to beat her. With that said I must be going *Says Iori as he walks towards his next battle*
Alright *Says the annoucer* The second match will begin now. Its Iori Yagami VS Ria the lone wolf. we will be sure to see some really interesting moves today.
Ria i do not like hitting women but since your my opponent and i must win ill make an exception. *Says Iori*
Oh wow i feel so special cause you are going to hit me *Says Ria in a sarcastic voice*
Iori dashes at her and punches her with a flaming fist and right after he hits her she launches a series of powerful zondes at Iori and stuns him*
Damn I cant move!! *Iori then gets uppercutted and sent into the air* Owww so much for being quick on my feet *Yells Iori as he hits the ground with a thud*
I cant move. If i dont get up soon ill.. oh crap *Says iori as Ria starts charging up a Gibarta spell which freezes Iori's body*
Ok this determines it Ria is the winner. Tough luck on Iori to win this he cant lose more than two more times and has to do an extra battle to reclaim his position *Says the annoucer as Ria walks out of the arena. Then some nurses russh toward Iori to unfreeze him and treat his wounds*
Damn *Says Iori as he punches a hole in his wall*
Well im pissed about losing but Keliann will be getting home for work soon. She always finds a way to cheer me up some how.
*Just then Keliann walks into Iori's room and sees the hole* So you lost again? *Says Keliann as she hugs Iori* Yup and to a woman named Ria that had incredible spells and she was really strong too. Well im going to sleep *Says Iori as he lays down* I Guess i will to. *Says Keliann as she lays next to Iori*

[DarkMagician]

I approve... This story is well done as yet...

Here is a gift for good work... Use these well against your enemies, have you any that is...

[Deadly Zero]

I approve... This story is well done as yet...

Here is a gift for good work... Use these well against your enemies, have you any that is...

oh so you liked it so far
ill post up chapter 2 part-2 later on tonight
Ill be sure to use these weapons to my advantage
*DZ starts to sneak up behind an unsuspecting person and slits his throat*

[Poo Fly]

nicely done!!

[DarkMagician]

*Runs underneath the spray of blood, catching it in a magical goblet*

Ah...this should do it...

*Forces it down Poo Fly's throat*

Go Poo Fly...KILL! KILL! MWUAHAHAHAHAH...AAAHAHAHAHAAH!!!

[Deadly Zero]

ok heres part two of chapter two

Chapter Two Part-2 The Time rift
*Iori wakes up the next morning and sees Keliann has already made him his favorite breakfast and goes to join her*
Ahhh this smells wonderful. *Says Iori as he kisses Keliann on the cheek* *Iori then goes straight to eating and finish his food in less than three minutes*
Ahh Iori you broke your old record of three minutes and ten seconds. *Says Keliann* You might want to get going Iori or you might miss your next match.
Oh thanks for reminding me Keliann. Now I must be going *Says Iori as he heads out the door*
I wonder who my next opponent will be?? *Iori aks himself*
I hope its one of the new fighters that entered so i can show them my new technique. *Says Iori with an evil smirk on his face*
Ok ladies and gents todays match is Iori Yagami VS Dark Magician. I hear that DM has some really powerful spells that people could only dream of having. Ok match three of the Tournament will now begin!! *Says the announcer*
Oh so you are the Iori Yagami I heard so much about from Ria. *Says DM*
I watched how she beat you and I will finish you twice as fast!! *Says DM as he charges up a RAbarta spell*
That wont work on me this time!! *Yells Iori as his body becomes engulfed in flames*
*DM then launches the ice spell at him and nothing happens*
Damn, so Ill have to beat you sensless now. *Says DM. Right then DM gets uppercutted with a flaming fist and sent into the air. Iori then telports into the air and kicks him toward the ground with tremendous force.* Damn you!! *Yells DM. When the smoke clears Iori sees a giant crater but not DM*
Hmmm where did he go??
*Iori then lands on the ground and looks around*
Hey what the?!?! *DM appears out of no where and blasts Iori with a grants*
Ahhhhh *Yells Iori as he gets hit by grants*
*Right when Iori gets up DM charges up a powerful megid*
What the he... *Says Iori as he gets hit by megid and falls to the ground*
Hmm worthless fool. You should never anger me ever again wait you cant your dead. *Says DM with an evil looking smirk on his face*
*Keliann then runs up to Iori's dead body crying*
You what did you do to him?!
*DM replies* They said to win a match you have to either knock them out of the ring or kill them so i killed him.
You Bastard why...why...
*Keliann then looks at Iori's body and passes out*
*Iori then wakes up and fins himself in a cave laying down in a bed*
Where am I?? *Iori asks himself. Then someone replies*
You are in my lab.I found you unconcious in the forest about a week ago. I thought you were dead and wanted to leave you there but Tifa begged me to bring you here to revive you. *Iori looks at the fomar and asks him a few questions*
Who are you? Where am I? and where is Keliann??
*The man replies* I am Lucieus Kain, and this beauty is Tiffany.
*Iori the looks at Tiffany and then back at Lucieus Kain*
What year is it? *Lucieus Kain replies* this is the year 3500.
*Iori then says*
This cant be im a thousand years in the future but how did this happen?!?
*Then a familiar voice answers his question*
When we fought in that tournament I opened a warp of some kind and just about everyone was pulled into the portal.
*iori then says* So is keliann here?? Is she alright??
*Keliann then walks in the room with Ria*
Yes im here and im ok. *Ria then speaks*
Yes we must find a way back into our time so we will have to find someone with knowledge of time travel which will be pretty hard as we are considered unusual by the way we speak, dress, and fight. So where do we start?
*Iori then replies*
First we must gather everyone that got pulled into the portal and let them know what we are going to do.
*A man then runs into the room* We are under attck by a horde of demons and our men are away! We will all be slaughtered!
*Iori then replies*
No, we wont die.They will!! Everyone ready we attck on three. one....two...three *Then Iori, Ria, Keliann, DM, Lucieus Kain and Tiffany then run outside to meet the enemy head on*

[Hayami]

Now this is so called "magnificent"
Man this isn't just the boring pso story like killing falz and so..This fanfic is a little diffrent and i like that!!
Keep going DZ it's superb!!!!!!