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There was a little extra to the 15'th chapter. I shall add it on in the quote.
DarkMagician Wrote:Chapter 15: After The Battle
V and Logan were on Pioneer 2 again, watching the Ruins explode. "Hmm...Maybe we should have a look..." V said thoughtfully. They returned through the telepipe, and all there was left was rubble and standing upright in the rubble...Chi Gochisoo, RobDeLaMorte's sword. Utterly unscratched, V walked up to it, and pulled it up. "I think they both..." Logane began. V stayed quiet, attaching the sword to his arm socket. All of a sudden, vast amounts of light converged on the sword, and it projected a recorded image of RobDeLaMorte. "If you watch this, I have perished. I will be reborn soon, maybe now, maybe up to a decade, but I WILL return. Until then, then... One other thing, I know it is V that will have picked my sword up, just a reminder; You lose my sword, your arse is mine! One last thing, during the time I am gone, I can reincarnate, though not as a humanoid..." the message cut out. "Well...that was...different..." Logan said confusedly. They took a telepipe to the Forest, to see how DarkMagician and Tiffany were holding up.
When RobDeLaMorte used his final attack, destroying the Ruins, himself and Grave, the planet shook. DarkMagician fell over, and as he was about to headbutt the floor, he was stopped. "!?" He looked up. Tiffany had caught him. "!!!" She was surrounded by an aura of magic, and DarkMagician swore he could see lightning in her eyes. "So we made it then!" She said quietly. DarkMagician nodded. "That earthquake woke me...What was it?" DarkMagician opened his mouth to reply, and just then a wolf walked into the room. "W-what the!?" DarkMagician blurted. It sat down in front of them, watching them. Tiffany charged up some magic, "No, wait Tiffany! See the mark on his head!" It was Jut. "What the HELL's going on?! Is that RobDeLaMorte??" The wolf howled at hearing this. "But...How? Why?" DarkMagician and Tiffany asked in tandem. "Perhaps you should look at this..." V called, as he and Logan strode into the room...
"So...He was reincarnated as a wolf?" DarkMagician asked after the hologram faded again. "Yes." Logan replied. "And what of the traitor, Grave?" V laughed, "He has gone...from one GRAVE situation, to another...Hahaha!" Logan started to laugh also. The wolf growled his disgust. DarkMagician frowned, as he slapped V. "Ooow!" "NEVER, make such a rubbish joke again, you hear me!?" "....." Logan laughed some more, and Tiffany sighed at the futility of it all. "So now what? Is it over already?" She asked. DarkMagician shook his head, "No...we did not recover the crystals, and without them my MASTER PLAN will not work..." V started to dance happily. Logan looked confused, and showed it in his first question, "What the fu--" "LOGAN!" "Nevermind..." V started to laugh, as he produced the crystals from his inventory pack. "Here!" He handed them to DarkMagician. DarkMagician burst out laughing, and slapped V on the back playfully, sending him to the floor. Tiffany looked bewildered also, "What...are... those crystals?" DarkMagician explained, "A long time ago, we found these magic crystals. When brought together, they can grant a wish to each person there!" He handed one to Tiffany, one to V, one to Logan and held up the other two. The wolf howled in dismay...
The giant head appeared once more. This time, it looked normal. It opened it's eyes, and a smile appeared on it's face. "DarkMagician! It has been a long time! Shouldn't you be dead by now?" DarkMagician laughed out, "No...no...I WAS dead, but my friends here revived me!" The head appeared quite amused by this, "Ah! I sense two others yet live also! Logan, and Pete. But...Pete is a robot? Why is this?" V stepped in, "I am called V now. I encased myself in this robot's body, after my original one became old and worn." "I see...so, what did you need DarkMagician?" DarkMagician smiled broadly, as he made his request...
Epilogue: Wish Upon A Crystal Star
After one hour, the head granted DarkMagician's wish. And though they had to fight Dark Falz again, IT fell swiftly. And just what DID DarkMagician wish for? His dead friend's restoration? More power? His lost love, Sakura? No. He wished simply for more adventures... And he got them......
I HAVE STARTED A SEVENTH STORY! (HOLY SHI--Something...)
I will post it up in a moment.
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Note: Once again, the only characters that are mine are; V, RobDeLaMorte and DarkMagician. There are some...famous... Guest appearences... I know they shall enjoy reading about themselves, as I have portrayed them, KYAAHAHAHA!
Prologue: DarkMagician's wish three months ago, led to possibly the worst event in the entire history of Algol, Ragol, and indeed, the galaxy even.
Many more hunters had been trained, and eventually most of Ragol's monsters were extinct. Only in The Ruins did an endless stream remain, though the hunters soon tired of killing them. The hunters soon got bored, and though these were finally peaceful times, many could not adapt. Fights started to break out, at first between one or two people. Now, the fighting is worldwide. This story follows DarkMagician, as he attempts to escape the now insane planet...
At this moment, DarkMagician was in a battle, fighting for his life, against the young prodigy, Relmitos...
Chapter 1: Struggle Against Young Bloods
"Damn it Relmitos! Cease this! We can still esca-AARGH!" DarkMagician screamed, as Foie hit him square in the chest, sending him sprawling. "Hahahah! I'm gonna be the world's most powerful FOmar! The one who slew DarkMagician!" Relmitos called triumphantly, as DarkMagician stood up slowly. "Do not bet on it...GRAAANTS!!!" Countless arrows of light converged on Relmitos, before exploding. His bloodied body lay on the floor, smoking as DarkMagician stood there in sorrow. "*Sighs* It never ends... I have fought...and killed, so many...too many... When will this end!?! Hunter killing hunter... It's not right! And yet...we still fight..." Just then, a loud scream came from behind him, "NOOOO!!! REEELMIIITOOOOS!!!" A fine young FOmarl dressed in green, ran over to his body, and saw he was dead. "YOU KILLED HIM!!! AAAAH!!! I SHALL KILL YOU!!! WHEN YOU DIE, TELL RELMITOS THAT MIRINEE SENT YOU!!!" She shouted, as she stared at DarkMagician, hate in her wide green eyes. "Wait! Please! I do not wish for any more killi-" "DIE!!!" She screamed, leaping to the attack...
Before DarkMagician could defend himself, Mirinee cast a pre-emptive spell at him. "Magic Ball!" She called, as a large ball of yellow magic flew at DarkMagician. Without warning, it exploded next to him, sending him onto the floor. Blood seeped from his chest, and he whispered, "R-resta!" and got up again, this time ready for her. "Mirinee! I shall not warn you again..." He said, as he started to glow, "Leave me! NOW!" She stayed silent, hatred burning brighter in her eyes, and then she placed her hand on a pendant of hers. DarkMagicain's body was caught in an icy cold grip, he felt as though his life were being drained from him. She released her hand, and DarkMagician dropped to one knee. "Alright...that is it! I did not want to do this, but you gave me no choice!" DarkMagician glowed brighter, and then, a multi-coloured beam of magic sprayed from his eyes, hitting Mirinee. "Aaaaaahhh!!!" She screamed, as she was bathed in extraordinarily powerful magics. He poured on more magic, and Mirinee continued screaming on agony. Eventually, on one knee, and blood seeping from her mouth, and she screamed, "Stop! I yield! Let me live!" DarkMagician stopped, and walked over to her as she struggled to stand up...
Chapter 2: An ally?
DarkMagician stood there, towering over the defeated Mirinee. "I am amazed! No-one has EVER lasted so long against my purest magic without dying... What ARE you!?!" Mirinee laughed, as she failed to stand up again, "Me? I am just Mirinee, a friend of Relmitos WHOM YOU KILLED!" DarkMagician looked away, ashamed. "I..did not mean to... but he attacked me without reason! I tried to stop him, make him surrender, but he had gone battle crazy, I'd no choice. At any rate, had I not killed him, he would have killed YOU too!" Mirinee went silent, the last piece of rage falling from her mind. "Anyway, I apologise for my deeds. I see that the madness has not taken you yet also. Listen to me, I seek to escape this insane planet. I can take you with me if you want, I ask because I cannot go on much longer alone... Even I have my limits..." Mirinee looked at Relmitos, at the floor, then at DarkMagician. "...Okay...What now then?" She asked uncertain. DarkMagician healed her, and helped her up. "Let's see...I must check my map, that last battle disorientated me... Okay, here's where we are I reckon. Now, pay attention Mirinee! Should I fall, then YOU must go on without me! It's the least I can do for Relmitos." Mirinee smiled faintly. "Okay, we must head almost direct south, to THIS DOCK. Once we have taken a ship from there to Gal De Val island, we head west again, and there should be a HIDDEN SPACESHIP that Red Ring Rico told me about years ago. She kept it for emergencies..." DarkMagician fell silent, reminiscing. Suddenly, Mirinee hissed, Look! There! Someone is coming!" A man wearing a crimson-red cape, and a claw strode towards them. "So...You really ARE here..." The stranger called out quietly.....
"Who are you!?" DarkMagician asked, as Mirinee warned, "Keep away! Or else!" The stranger bowed, extending his claw. "Forgive my rudeness... I, am Kashima! I have followed you silently for many days, and overheard your plan just now. I want in. I too, am sick of this madness!" DarkMagician looked uneasy, "Well...It is true we shall need help...But how do I know I can trust you?" Kashima's eyes widened, as he said quickly, "They say actions speak louder than words, and it appears I now get the chance to prove it! We're under attack!!!" Mirinee reacted first, "!!!" she dived, knocking DarkMagician down, as a blade swiped the air where DarkMagician was. DarkMagician looked up, and recognition dawned on his face. A yellow haired warrior holding a large sword stood there, grinning cruelly. "Wait! I know this one! Cloud! Are you still sane too?" DarkMagician asked. Cloud swiped at him again, missing, "Shut up, fool! Fight me!"
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Chapter 3: The Evil Taint
Before DarkMagician fully readied himself, Cloud carved down his chest. "Yeeaarrrgh! Dammit Cloud! No mercy for you!" DarkMagician shouted out enraged. Kashima leapt at Cloud, and carved across his face with his claw, leaving a bloody trail. "AAARR!!! I'LL KILL ALL OF YOU!!!" Cloud screamed, his voice shaking with anger. "Gifoie!" Mirinee called, as she cast it. Cloud di not even try to dodge, rather, he ran into it, trying to slash Kashima. Kashima easily evaded the entire attack, and counter-attacked. "Power Claw!" Kashima called, as his claw changed to a golden colour. He carved down Cloud's chest, drawing blood, yet Cloud tried to fight on. DarkMagician's eyes narrowed, "Dark Magic Tornado!" he shouted, as dark magic whirled around Cloud, trapping him. Cloud screamed in disbelief, then agony, as the magic formed over his head, and a beam of Pure Darkness covered his entire body. After it vanished, only some traces of blood and his sword left any references to what had happened to Cloud.....
DarkMagician averted his eyes, and sighed once more. "That poor idiot... Anyway, I trust you now Kashima. You have proven yourself to us, let us go onwards then!" As they walked south, Mirinee suddenly called out, "Wait!" Kashima and DarkMagician stopped. "DarkMagician...I must ask you...I heard that this was all YOUR FAULT...Is this true?" DarkMagician's eyes watered, "Yes...it is true...Allow me to explain..." He then proceeded to speak of his last adventure, that last wish, and how this is all connected. At the end, Kashima asked, "So, if you had not wished for adventure, this would not have happened?" DarkMagician stayed silent. Mirinee stood up, and slapped him hard, knocking him over. "MIRINEE!" Kashima shouted aghast. DarkMagician got up slowly, and saw the pain in her eyes too. "No...She is right...I deserved it...had I not wished for adventure, her friend Relmitos would not have died by my hand..." They all fell silent. "....DarkMagician?" Kashima asked quietly. "Yes?" "What happened to your friends, V and RobDeLaMorte?" DarkMagician thought for a while. "You know...I don't know. We all went seperate ways after that final adventure. V is on Gal De Val already, our destination, and RobDeLaMorte..well..." "Well?" "...He is the sort that CRAVES action! He is probably in the thick of it, as we speak..." They fell silent again. "Let us make camp here, hidden in this hollow tree." Kashima said. "Yes, I am tired too...Let's rest." DarkMagician replied, as Kashima walked off to the tree, and got inside his tent. Mirinee still sat there, silent, thinking. "Mirinee?" DarkMagician asked quietly. No response. "Listen...I truly AM sorry for Relmitos... Had I the chance to go back and top myself, I would... And I am sorry for hurting you earlier... But please can you forgive me? I need your help, if we are to escape this planet! You are far stronger than you admit. Please think about it..." He walked off, into the tree. Mirinee smiled slightly, and looked up to the full moon...
The following morning, DarkMagician awoke first. He looked around, Kashima and Mirinee were not there. "?" He walked outside. Mirinee had fallen asleep where she sat last night, looking at the moon. DarkMagician looked around. Kashima was a distance away, near the river. "Probably getting resources for the journey..." DarkMagician mused. He walked over to Mirinee. "Mirinee...? Mirinee! Wake up! Time to g-AAAAHHHH!!!" Mirinee had woken, and reacted by instinct by firing a Magic Ball at DarkMagician, catching him completely off-guard. Kashima sprinted back after hearing the scream, "What's going on!?? Are we under attack again!?" DarkMagician staggered, clutching his chest, as Mirinee woke up fully. "What? Oh no! Sorry DarkMagician! I thought you were an enemy..." DarkMagician stood up, and cast Barta at her, which she only just dodged. "!!!" "Perhaps I AM an enemy!" DarkMagician shouted angrily. Kashima and Mirinee looked at him horrified. "....Sorry... I... I think it started affecting me too... We must escape this tainted planet!" DarkMagician stated, looking at the floor. "...Alright. Let's carry on." Kashima said quietly.
Chapter 4: The Battlefield
As they walked along, they noted that there were many dead hunters lying on the floor. Mirinee recognised one, and was about to cast Reverser as DarkMagician grabbed her hand. "Look at the eyes, Mirinee..." She looked. They were crazed, enraged. They carried on walking. Eventually, as they climbed up a big hill, an incredible sight beheld them.....
In the field below, there was a Battle Royal. Hundreds, if not thousands, of hunters were all fighting to the death, and more kept pouring in through telepipes at each end. "My...god..." Mirinee whispered. Magic and blood flew with wild abandon. The floor was littered with the bodies of the fallen. Death screams could be heard even from here. Kashima stayed silent, but DarkMagician's blood boiled. "Those IDIOTS! Do they not realise they will all kill each other!? I see friends turning on each other, and new enemies being made. Intolerable! I cannot stand it!" DarkMagician's body started to cover in darkness. "DarkMagician?!" Kashima and Mirinee asked simultaneously. DarkMagician levitated into the air, crackling with Dark Magics. "....rrrrRRRRRAAAAHHHH!!!" DarkMagician screamed, as energy started to crackle and cover him. "MEGIIIDBREEATH!!!" DarkMagician took a deep breath, and blasted a torrent of Megid directly onto the battlefield. Hundreds fell, dead. The rest carried on fighting, some retaliating with magic of their own towards DarkMagician's party. DarkMagician, after casting this ultimate spell, levitated back down to the floor, and collapsed unconscious. Kashima examined him. "He needs rest." Mirinee flipped, "Are you kidding?! They all know we are here! If we rest here, they wil finish us off!" Kashima thought for a moment, looking around. "There may yet be a way out! See that tunnel there?" Mirinee turned around. A doorway, etched in black stone stood open at the face of a nearby cave. "The Ruins side entrance? Is it safe though?" "I don't know..." Kashima responded, as they both walked slowly there, supporting DarkMagician...
They entered the Ruins. As they walked along, they began to feel something was wrong. The bodies of the animals of Ragol, and many other dead hunters littered the floors. They walked on, uneasily. Suddenly, Kashima motioned to stop. "Mirinee, look at these bodies. They are all carved up the exact same way! One thing has killed all of these... But what!?" Just then, DarkMagician roused himself. "Wh-where am I...?" He asked weakly. "He's awake!" Mirinee exclaimed. Kashima rolled his eyes, "DarkMagician, listen to me. We could not pass through that battlefield, so we took a detour into the Ruins...What!?" DarkMagician had leapt up, moaning, "Nooo! Not here! Not now! You fools! This is the WORST thing you could have done!" Terror covered his face. "Why?! What is so bad that it could break YOU out into a sweat!?" Mirinee asked fearfully. "R-remember I told you both of my friends..." "Yes..." "And how one of them, RobDeLaMorte, would likely be fighting for fun..." "Yes..." ".....Ruins is where he resides." Kashima took a step back. "And these bodies...look how they are carved...do you think...?" DarkMagician wailed, "Yes! RobDeLaMorte is here somewhere!"
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Great ending and excellent starting DM. You are a true story writer. You should really think about publishing these. But still not charging us heh heh. I look forward to more.
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Thank you again grave. this seventh story...it is a dark one, is it not? This may end it forever I think.
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Good stuff; plenty of action and ohhh, spells  !
Yey, I'm impressed. I actually managed to hurt you!
Okay, a few questions: Relmitos was really random. Why did he suddenly act like that? Why did Cloud suddenly want to fight? Why were the "idiots" fighting?
You're very imaginative. I can't wait to see the outcome of the story. Keep up the good work now.
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i love the story so far kudos to you dm ! :bandit:
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Hey DM you are to good to quit. Personally i think you should continue to make more stories and because of your stories i have began writing my own. You are an inspiration for me but one question Is Iori/Zero in this one or are they gone??
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Another question I had forgoten to ask. What time does thsi fall into to? As in before mine or after, or before or after DZs? Just wondering.
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Go Dm, Go Dm, Go!!
Superb as always..
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