My first Fanfic

[Deadly Zero]

heres the forth chapter. its not that great but i was thinking of making a chapter like this so bear with me.

Chapter four: Death and rebirth

Ahhh damn.. where am I? *DM asks himself as a FOmar walks into the room*
You are in my cabin and i found you knocked out by the waterfall but i saved you couse you have not fulfilled your destiny to slay the destined one.
You have met him.. he is that red haired guy named... Iori Yagami.You are destined to kill him and become the most powerful force that ever lived and if things go ok for you, you could become immorrtal and live forever.
*DM then interupted the fomar while he was speaking*
Hmm if what you are saying is true then what happens if i end up being the one that gets killed?
Oh DM you worry to much i will help you kill him and make you the ultimate force.
*Then a group of angry gibbles attack the force and DM*
Oh shit *Yells Dm as he casts a powerful megid breath on the gibbles*
die now!! *yells DM as the fomar also cast a megid breath* How did you do that?! *Asks DM*
I was too one of the most powerful forces that existed DM. I am your grandfather.
No you cant be my grandfather he died on pioneer 1.
Do i did not die they made up that as a cover story for my disappearance. *Says DM's grandfather*
Now go DM the man you seek is in a bar about 5 miles from here. go now and kill him!!
*Dm then teleports to the bar and walks in*
*Iori sees Dm and hides in the shadows*
Whats he doing here i thought we had finished him at the waterfall.
it doesnt matter i must tell the others that he is here.*Iori then sees Ria walk by and pulls her into the room he is in*
hey ria DM is still alive and he is here.
*Ria then looks at him and says*
ok lets get the others. *Iori then goes and gets kain,tiffany and ria gets in contact with grave*
Grave this is Ria we need you again. *Grave replies*
What for?? Well its about DM, Grave DM is still alive and his is here.
Impossible!!*yells grave*
ok ill be right there.
*With a flash Grave appears in the bar and goes straight for DM*
DM!!! YOU WILL DIE NOW!! *Yells Grave as he pulls out his scthye*
No grave not here!! *Yells Iori*
There are to many people here that could be hurt.
*Grave then launches his scthye at DM and cuts him across the chest. Iori then grabs keliann and helps the other people escape.*
Go Keliann help out any people that are injured and... Aghh!!
*Yells Iori as grave's scthye stabs him in the back*
Damn. *Iori begins to cough as he turns to see grave and DM*
You..you...did...thi...s...to......m....e..
*Mumbles Iori as he pulls out the scthye and his fist becomes covered in purple flames*
Take this!! *yells iori as he throws fire at DM*
Fool this fire wont hurt....me..What the!!?? why is it burning me?!?!
*Iori then answers DM's question*
This is not regular fire, this is fire powered by my orochi blood and it burns your very soul!!
OIh hell *yells DM as he falls to the ground and cast a megid at Iori. Iori sees the oncoming megid and jumps out of the way*
That wont work on me again!! *Yells Iori as he dashes toward DM and performs his Demonic Rush*
*Then out of no where DM's grandfather appears and renders Iori powerless*
Now DM kill him!!
*Dm then runs toward Iori and starts to hit him with spells over and over again*
Now its time to show you true power Iori!!
*Dm then hits iori with pure magic and kills him*
*Everyone stands there looking at where Iori had been killed to see that his body became covered in flames and burnt to a crisp.*
*Iori then wakes up in a room that is completely white and starts to stumble around*
Where am I?

[Hayami]

DZ what are u talking about???? this chapter was so cool!!!...
But hey..Poor him getting a scythe right in his chest.... :'(
But still it is superb!! keep it up!

[Deadly Zero]

ok i need somemore people to send me more characters for use in the story.
Im still going to use the characters i have so far but i need more. about 4-6 more will do so far i got kashima

[Grave_Guardian]

Yes DZ that chapter was amazing, you now not how good your work is. PM Darkmatter he may join, although it is slim.

[DarkMagician]

Humans...*Chuckles* Always so easy to kill....

Keep it up, or else I kill you!...Again...

[Hayami]

If you want you can use my character.
Keiji.

if you want to know about him or something here it is:

Name : Keiji
ID : SKYLY
Age : 14
Gender : Male
Blood group : O
Height : 1,54
Weight : 81 Ibs
Type: : FOmar

Physical Desc. :
Keiji is a human and looks like a normal person.
He has a rather slim body than normal.
He also has light green eyes.

Cloth Type:
Keiji has light robes most of the time.
Most of them is airy only because he don't get too sweaty in battles
And so he can move more freely. He also wears a bandanna.
He has a dark green suit, and light green haircolor.

Equipment:
His weapon is the C-sorcerer's cane.

there.. If you don't need a force i have my other chars.

[Deadly Zero]

ok ill use him hayami.

[Deadly Zero]

ok heres chapter five

Chapter Five: Tale of the Orochi

*A voice answer Iori's question*
You are here young one. Oh I see you also possese the blood of the Orochi.
How do you know i have orochi blood in me?!?! *Yells Iori as he gets ready to kill whoever is around him*
CALM DOWN YOUNG OROCHI!!! *Then Goenitz appears from nowhere and renders Iori to his knees *
You.. you died i killed you!!! your one of the reasons im like this Goenitz. You are a person with pure orochi blood in his veins. i will never listen to you!!!
*Goenitz then smacks Iori with a gust of powerful wind*
Let us fight then i will tell you the truth behind our heritage little one.
STOP CALLING ME THAT GOENITZ!!! now i will kill you!!
*Iori then gets up and his body bursts into flames. As Iori powers up Goebitz laughs and throws a gust of wind at him. Iori recovers from the blow but notices something weird Goenitz was gone and no where to be seen. Just then Goenitz uppercuts Iori into the air but while in mid air Iori launches his demonic scorcher at Goenitz. The incrdibly huge flames meet Goenitz wind head on and cause an explosion.
They both then dash at eachother and start exchanging punches and kicks at a rapid rate. about ten minutes later they jump back and start to become possesed by the orochi blood. Iori then bends back in pain and transforms into the possesed version of himself that seeks the blood of others and goenitz turns into something similiar but can still talk.*
Ahh my true form...thank you for awaking it for me Iori but in your form you cant even talk. heheh HAHAHA *Then Iori mumbles something*
y....o....u...you.....w..il...l...d...i...e...h.e...re..g.o.en..i...t...z!DIE!!!!!!!!!!
*Then Iori unleahes a hidden power and launches it at Goenitz. Goenitz begins thinking*
Fool this attack wont affect me.....?!?!?!
*Then Goenitz's bosy turns purple and cant move. Iori then runs toward him and starts striking him in the chest then he picks him up by the chest and scorches his body. Then Iori throws Goenitz's battered body on the ground and starts to pound his chest with flaming fists. Iori then grabs Goenitz by the chest and starts pressing down on it with extreme force. iori then rips out Goenitz heart out and burns it into nothing.*
BWBAHAHABWHAHWA!!!! *Yells Iori in a twisted voice of victory. Iori turns around and sees Goenitz is gone and turns toward where his body was and then gets struck in the back of the head causing him to pass out.*
*Iori begins to regain conciouness*
You almost had him kill me Orochi!! any longer and i would be dead.
Shut up Goenitz our guest is finally awake now you should tell him the truth about the orochi blood.
*Iori then replies*
I know the truth and the truthn is it is nothing but evil.
Iori you know nothing of the matter for your information those born with Orochi blood were special but humans feared our incredible strenght so much they started killing off our family. thats when the Yagami clan which you are the last of the blood line saw what the humans were doing and helped us out by drinking our blood to fend off the humans. But the orochi blood was originally good but the humans introduced it to hate and evil causing it to become evil itself. So now you know the truth Iori what ever you do now is up to you Iori. You may have to kill some of your freinds because their families where some of the ones that killed off your clan.
I know who most of these are and you will help us out iori for you are destined to become his ally and fight back!!
*Iori then says*
I see so i will help you out in destroying these pathetic humans that made us this way!!
You can be sure that they will all die slowly and painfully!!
Goenitz!! Yes sir what do you need? *Asks Goenitz*
You go accompany Iori and help him we are few of the carriers of the orochi blood and we must help eachother out in order to fulfill our destiny.
the eradication of all that oppose us.
Oh and Iori i want you to meet someone her name is Sakura. She is a well trained force and is one of the few that has our blood in her.
Iori one more person i want you to meet....your brother...or should i say your clone.
*The clone walked out from behind the wall and looked just like Iori but had blue hair blue eyes and blue fire.*
we created him in your image to obtain ultimate power. So Iori what will you call him??
I will call him Fei.
Oh good name Iori but one thing though he doesnt talk much for some reason though.
*Then Fei Manages to mumble a few words*
I.....W..A..S....CRE..A.TED......TO.....DES.....T..R....O...Y....A..L...L!!
*Then the group of four head out in search of the first few victims on their list which are Tiffany and Kain*
I must destroy these humans in order to avenge my family!! *Thinks Iori as he walks toward the hotel where his former freinds were staying*
*Iori then walks into the room and sees everyone that some him die stare at him with a confused look. just then Ria comes around the corner and sees iori and runs to him*
Hurry Iori we are making plans to stop DM now!!But how did you survive?!?!
Its hard to kill me. *Says Iori as he mentally communicates with Fei, Sakura, and goenitz telling them to come in a few minutes after him and wait for him to give the signal to attack*
Sure lead the way Ria. *Says Iori with an evil look in his eyes*
*As soon as Iori walks through the door everyone sees him and asks how he lived and that keliann is crying over his death*
I did not die it is to hard to kill me.

[Deadly Zero]

ok chap. 6 is on the way ill post it up later

[Deadly Zero]

oh nevermind i already finished it here it is:

Chapter six: The Betrayal of Iori

Iori so thats the plan we are going to use to find DM and kill him before he reaches immortality. So any suggestions?? * Asks Ria as she looks around at everyone near her*
Yes I have one *Yells Keliann*
We should do what Iori tells us to he knows how powerful DM is. I object!! *Yells Grave*
I have fought DM more thanIori ever has i hould be in charge.
Hummph fools you should all just die now and let me live.
*Everyone looks suspicously at Iori and they all begin to draw their weapons*
Are you the real Iori?? *Asks Keliann as she is sent into the air by a gust of wind*
Yes and why do you not trust me!! *Yells Iori as he powers up*
I knew it Iori has become possesed again!! *Yells Grave*
no he hasnt i know what his power feel liks when he is possesed and this is way to much more powerful... no it cant be...
*Then Iori gives the signal and Goenitz, Sakura and Fei burst into the room and head toward Iori*
Now we will kill Kain and Tiffany and if any of you try to interfere i will kill you too!!
*Iori then dashes toward Tiffany and grabs her by the throat and slings her out the window.
Fei then does the same to kain and then iori and Fei jump out the window to kill them while Goenitz and Sakura took care of the others*

Goenitz we should combine our powers to hold these fools off as Iori and Fei kill the other two!!
Yes I agree.
*Then Goenitz body starts to transform into a demon/angel looking creature and Sakura's body becomes a harpy looking creature with beautiful looks but deadly attacks. Then they send their power into an orb and then absorb it mixing their powers together*
Hahahah *Yells Sakura as she performs the ultimate Grants spell which hits everyone repeatedly. Then Goenitz uses his wind powers to launch everyone into the air and then out the window. Everyone hits the ground with a thud and pass out. Mean while iori and fei are fighting with Kain and Tiffany. Iori then gets hit in the crotch and he feels nothing then he grabs tiffany by the hair and slings her through a brick wall then he knee her in the genital area caysing her extreme pain. Tiffany hurries to get up to cast resta but then sees Kain's dead body get thrown at her by Fei. No kain!!!!! What did you do to him?!?!
*Iori then answers her question*
He drained his soul which caused him to die so quickly..
*Tiffany looks at Fei and asks him who he is. He replies*
I was created to destroy all...
What do you mean!! *Yells Tiffany. Iori then answers her*
He is my clone. he can do everything i can and looks just like my little brother which your family took from me 15 years ago!!! I think of him as my brother now!!
*Then Iori throws Tiffany through another wall and watches her hit the ground crying*
Enough i surrender...please dont kill me.. ill do anything you want!! anything!!!
God for a girl you sure are desperate. *Says iori as he kisses her on the lips and drains the life out of her*
Hahah what a deadly kiss.
*Just then a group of hunters who saw him kill her get their weapons ready to attack him*
Hmm more humans for me to play with.. what fun i am having today.
*Iori and Fei then single handedly kill all the hunters with two powerful Demonic schorchers (Which is a spell that makes pure orochi magic erupt from the ground in a giant wave toward the enemy)
HAHAHAHA fools you didnt have to die...yet....
*Yells Iori as he fei, sakura and Goenitz walk through a portal and report back to Orochi. Mean while Ria wakes up and sees the massacre around her.*
oh no he did this!! He is a being with no heart!! *Yells Ria as she wakes up all the survivor s and heals them.
Later that day Keliann,ria,and evryone else are having a meeting on what to do about Iori,Fei,Sakura,Goenitz, and DM.*