The Saga Of DarkMagician: My fanfic

[DarkMagician]

I didn't want to say anything, but now I speak. I agree with Mirinee. My say is, I don't see much descriptive writtign here abotu what's going on. It seems in some parts you rush so far ahead I'm left thinking "how did that happen?" I reckon you are leaving points out here.

Don't get angry or anything, you're story is quite acceptable but you need more work. If you don't belive me, I know a review site (unfortunatly for TM and anime fics only) and if they got ahold of your fic they review it and be much harsher. Trust me, taking bad review spurs yuo on to become a better writter. Honestly IS the best policey you know.

I could prove to you how much I've improved within hmm.. 3 years. But my first attempts were so poor I'd die if anyone read them T_T;

Advice: Read some stories or books.

Agh...I have gone soft from having good friends here (They know who they are, K M, +A) Usually, I would beat you both to death for this. But, I knew from the start the detail was too little.

As I said, I did them for fun, and at the end of the day, I really could not give a buggery as to what anyone else thinks.

Kashima, thank you for supporting me anyway.

Mirinee, thank you for betraying me...oops, I meant, thanks for the consrtuctive criticism.

By the way, I have read in total 356 BOOKS BY VARIOUS AUTHORS. SO PLEASE DO NOT TELL ME TO READ BOOKS.

[Kashima]

dont feel bad my crappy little fic is next ! :S

[Ria]

As I said, I did them for fun, and at the end of the day, I really could not give a buggery as to what anyone else thinks.

OK ok.. fine. Don't get so touchy about it.

by the way, I have read in total 356 BOOKS BY VARIOUS AUTHORS. SO PLEASE DO NOT TELL ME TO READ BOOKS.

*sweatdrop...* I've never seen anyone so touchy about a review. I did compliment you shesh..

[Kashima]

OK ok.. fine. Don't get so touchy about it.




*sweatdrop...* I've never seen anyone so touchy about a review. I did compliment you shesh..

Oh come now miss Ria we all know that dm doesnt take kindly to criticism its not a flaw just his personality

[DarkMagician]

OK ok.. fine. Don't get so touchy about it.




*sweatdrop...* I've never seen anyone so touchy about a review. I did compliment you shesh..

NAU! ONONONONOO! RIA! You completely misread my response! I was just saying IN GENERAL I DO NOT CARE. When it is RF members however, THEN I care.

Silly Ria. You should know by now... I do not hate you...much... Mwuahahahah!

I was thankful for your comments! Perhaps I worded my response wrong....

[Deadly Zero]

hmmm its over for DM. well one questoin though.
Did Iori/Zero die or did you forget about him?? and i have a proposition for you so ill PM you later on with the info
I also hope for another story DM if you need anyhelp if you are willing to make a new one my email is [email protected] or you could just PM me and ill be glad to help you with anything.

[DarkMagician]

Did zero die? And what of Grave and Tiffany? What about Logan?

I left these as OPEN QUESTIONS, so that YOU LOT COULD DECIDE. I.e, if you make your own fanfics, you have a base to work from.

zero, I accept your proposal for co-writing your story. I shall require time, however. A few days at most.

[Hayami]

PLEASE DON'T DIE DM *jumps on his head and begins to shake it* IF YOU DIE WHO WILL KILL MEEEEE???!!!.....erm....er....BOO!!

[DarkMagician]

How many times have I died now!?

this is the PERMENANT ONE THOUGH. I drained my life, to kill the evil Decs, o I can NEVER be brought back now. Live with it.

On a side note; I shall post some FUNNY FANFIC BASED BATTLES NOW. They are based on my fanfics!

[Poo Fly]

Yay! FUN!!!