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Thanks everyone. You can all be in it (at some point) and thanks for the 'constructive criricism' lol

I have written and posted a chapter 3 (it might not show up right now though)

Wait... It does show up. Check it out now!

what class is your char ton?

Ok, chapter 4 is now up (someone read it PLEASE!!)
It has Leaf and Talim in it, and Solem indirectly (what do they look like??)
It's a bit short, but leads to the group's stories

Chapter4 was good and my character looks like this

Talim looks exactly like the Good HUnewearl character in PSO III
Silver hair,with a white, purple, and black suit.

Thanks for that

your welcome im glad i could help
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HUnewearl:Talim Lv.44
Section ID:Bluefull
weapon choices: Kireeks soul eater,Pallach,and railgun
Mag:Lv.105

Well I figure you'll get better at writing, your chapters are still to short, if my chapters were that short i'd be done all six stories last week.

EDIT:Anybody read my fic anymore?

I'll just do more chapters I guess...

Leaf has shoulder length brown hair
the black outfit
an eyepatch over the left eye