Do you think it's good beat?
Yeh it is pretty good, although like the others have said, the chapters are a bit short, but you probably already know that now

Im in the process of making a Fanfic, im a member of Fanfiction.net and im just planning it out now, ill post a link to it when its up

Cool good luck!
Anyway, chapter 5 is up and running. It's not too exciting but it kinda give some information about the characters, enjoy!
i think that the story is comin along well
like everyone else i think you should lengthen the chapters but other than that it is good
I'll just do many short ones or something
Faulkie Wrote:I'll just do many short ones or something
Faulkie you haven't written in a while are still going thru with this story cause it seems you have stopped posting new chapter please write more!!!
gaaahhhh stop pressuring me! lol.
I have exams and stuff at the moment.
Faulkie Wrote:gaaahhhh stop pressuring me! lol.
I have exams and stuff at the moment.
Ah the tribulant life of a writer under fire. Lol!

Gaaaahhhh soon I'm gonna become a drug addict, quit school and become a tortured writing soul in search for true happiness but is always depressed! Or not.
Faulkie Wrote:Gaaaahhhh soon I'm gonna become a drug addict, quit school and become a tortured writing soul in search for true happiness but is always depressed! Or not.
Right, coming from you it just doesn't sound like all that much fun. :bandit: