The coffee stuff was supposed to represent how my mother likes her coffee. Espresso, no milk, no sugar. Put milk in that and you get one unhappy mother.
On topic: hehehehe, Inner Asshole...
ok!?!? anyways i did not know you mother doesent like coffee with milk
now lets get back on topic and i really think its good why dont you mimas?
ehh. I think a good humour story is good but it's getting a bit cute for my tastes, from the look of it. Not to say that it's a bad story so far, by any means, I just think it needs a bit of a darker touch.
ok its good to tell her so she knows what to improve and what to take away!
Let's just hope that Feline Witch reads the comments when she gets back...
yupp couse it is a good story
Its a really good story, everything kinda fits together....but....it just needs that one thing to make it perfect. Good Job!
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Oh, some action, u know, battles on ragol and stuff would be good too
hope she gets back soon shes on a vacation or something like that.
Yeah, i need more sections
Gao Than Wrote:Its a really good story, everything kinda fits together....but....it just needs that one thing to make it perfect. Good Job!
*EDIT*
Oh, some action, u know, battles on ragol and stuff would be good too
You stole the words outa my mouth... NOW GIVE EM BACK