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Finally, My PSO Fan-fic
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13-03-2005, 06:14 AM
Well done. Very well done. You have some awesome use of description in this story, everything is incredibly vivid and detailed (Always good for a story ^^). In any case, I can't really say there's anything I would change. I'm eager to read more and find out just what happened. I like how you're playing off his insecurity at the lack of memories, I'm eager to see what happens next ^__^
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Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Kisanzi - 12-03-2005, 04:54 AM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Kashima - 12-03-2005, 05:06 AM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Hayami - 12-03-2005, 02:15 PM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Karasu Murder - 12-03-2005, 05:46 PM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Kisanzi - 13-03-2005, 04:17 AM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Karasu Murder - 13-03-2005, 06:14 AM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Hayami - 13-03-2005, 12:28 PM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Kisanzi - 17-03-2005, 10:55 PM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Karasu Murder - 18-03-2005, 12:13 AM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Teh EkwEE - 18-03-2005, 12:42 AM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Hayami - 18-03-2005, 02:55 PM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Kisanzi - 20-03-2005, 10:54 PM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Kashima - 20-03-2005, 11:05 PM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Hayami - 21-03-2005, 09:51 AM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Karasu Murder - 31-03-2005, 05:46 PM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Kisanzi - 01-04-2005, 04:30 AM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Kisanzi - 01-04-2005, 04:31 AM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Kashima - 02-04-2005, 05:53 PM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Hayami - 02-04-2005, 06:47 PM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Karasu Murder - 07-04-2005, 01:23 PM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Kisanzi - 08-04-2005, 12:28 AM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Aroth - 10-04-2005, 06:45 PM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Kashima - 10-04-2005, 10:23 PM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Talim009 - 15-04-2005, 06:42 AM
Finally, My PSO Fan-fic - by Hayami - 14-04-2005, 05:19 PM

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