12-06-2005, 04:27 AM
Time ticks on; never ending
Life here isn't forever; stop pretending
When you're young, you wanna be older
And when you're old, that desire becomes colder
You spend life seeking after all the thrills
You gotta try it all even if it kills
And yet you fear death; ask for it to go away
Everpleading, until the end, for life to stay
But alas death overcomes you...
The one thing the world's united through- Foreshadow
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So what do you guys think so far?[/QUOTE]
Hi im new to this site so um ya how you all doing?
nice poem it is a bit depressing, mind hearing one of mine?
There are many kinds of love , one sided , couple love , passionate love , greedy love , and so much more but to me thus it is a one sided love.
i love without being loved back, i watch as another is loved by whome i love ,
in this love there is a candle witch grows dimmer and dimmer by each passing day, and when they candle flicks out this love shall move on.
as days go by i acquire a new love a new meaning to live and as 1 new candle sets to another it says " you are my eldest brother, you represent another time another life another love, another hope waiting to be lit ones more.
i hope its not too bad Well Thx for reading it
Life here isn't forever; stop pretending
When you're young, you wanna be older
And when you're old, that desire becomes colder
You spend life seeking after all the thrills
You gotta try it all even if it kills
And yet you fear death; ask for it to go away
Everpleading, until the end, for life to stay
But alas death overcomes you...
The one thing the world's united through- Foreshadow
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So what do you guys think so far?[/QUOTE]
Hi im new to this site so um ya how you all doing?
nice poem it is a bit depressing, mind hearing one of mine?
There are many kinds of love , one sided , couple love , passionate love , greedy love , and so much more but to me thus it is a one sided love.
i love without being loved back, i watch as another is loved by whome i love ,
in this love there is a candle witch grows dimmer and dimmer by each passing day, and when they candle flicks out this love shall move on.
as days go by i acquire a new love a new meaning to live and as 1 new candle sets to another it says " you are my eldest brother, you represent another time another life another love, another hope waiting to be lit ones more.
i hope its not too bad Well Thx for reading it
(³) WanTing to Call, WillinG to Speak
^)' Afraid of The AnswerS,To The Questio
(^ ns i Seak.Waiting in Life to See
You're Eyes, Trying not to be Judged, Trying My Best,... To Avoid you're cries
Life is like Fruit it can be sweet or sour
^)' Afraid of The AnswerS,To The Questio
(^ ns i Seak.Waiting in Life to See
You're Eyes, Trying not to be Judged, Trying My Best,... To Avoid you're cries
Life is like Fruit it can be sweet or sour