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My soon to be Fanfic
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19-12-2003, 07:55 PM
It needs work, but pretty good. I can give you some advice...

-Add some discription to senery, there actions etc...
-The intro needs a bit more depth to it...

You don't have to listen to me, but i'm only trying to help.
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My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 19-12-2003, 02:26 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Phantom_RAcast - 19-12-2003, 07:35 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 19-12-2003, 07:38 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Ash L-M - 19-12-2003, 07:55 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 19-12-2003, 08:06 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Ash L-M - 19-12-2003, 08:17 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 20-12-2003, 01:19 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Vahn RAmar - 22-12-2003, 10:58 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 11-01-2004, 10:27 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 12-01-2004, 01:28 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Vahn RAmar - 12-01-2004, 05:21 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 12-01-2004, 05:41 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 20-01-2004, 12:30 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Ton - 20-01-2004, 01:48 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 20-01-2004, 01:52 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Anjiru - 20-01-2004, 03:02 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 20-01-2004, 09:14 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 20-01-2004, 01:53 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by T_T1K - 20-01-2004, 02:45 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 20-01-2004, 07:08 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 21-01-2004, 12:02 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 22-01-2004, 12:01 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Ton - 22-01-2004, 03:24 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Vahn RAmar - 22-01-2004, 06:33 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 22-01-2004, 02:54 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 22-01-2004, 05:27 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 22-01-2004, 06:25 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 22-01-2004, 07:07 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 22-01-2004, 08:47 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 22-01-2004, 09:41 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 22-01-2004, 10:51 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 22-01-2004, 10:53 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 22-01-2004, 10:59 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 22-01-2004, 11:03 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 22-01-2004, 11:04 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 22-01-2004, 11:08 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Vahn RAmar - 23-01-2004, 01:51 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 23-01-2004, 01:54 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Vahn RAmar - 23-01-2004, 01:58 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 23-01-2004, 02:52 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Ton - 23-01-2004, 03:10 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 23-01-2004, 03:31 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Ton - 24-01-2004, 04:36 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Vahn RAmar - 24-01-2004, 08:23 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 24-01-2004, 03:03 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 24-01-2004, 10:35 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 25-01-2004, 12:06 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 25-01-2004, 12:09 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 25-01-2004, 12:18 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 25-01-2004, 12:16 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Neo1989 - 25-01-2004, 12:30 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 26-01-2004, 05:11 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 26-01-2004, 06:45 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 26-01-2004, 08:16 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Ton - 27-01-2004, 02:11 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 27-01-2004, 02:13 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Ton - 27-01-2004, 02:21 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 27-01-2004, 02:23 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Ton - 27-01-2004, 02:30 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 27-01-2004, 02:33 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Ton - 27-01-2004, 02:37 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 27-01-2004, 02:39 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Ton - 27-01-2004, 02:41 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 27-01-2004, 05:39 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 27-01-2004, 05:42 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 27-01-2004, 05:44 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Logan - 27-01-2004, 07:09 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 28-01-2004, 02:24 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Vahn RAmar - 28-01-2004, 05:25 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 28-01-2004, 06:48 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Cloud - 28-01-2004, 07:22 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 28-01-2004, 08:09 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 28-01-2004, 08:12 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Cloud - 28-01-2004, 08:26 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 28-01-2004, 08:28 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 28-01-2004, 08:52 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Cloud - 28-01-2004, 08:58 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 28-01-2004, 09:00 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Cloud - 28-01-2004, 09:04 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 28-01-2004, 10:32 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 29-01-2004, 01:26 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Cloud - 29-01-2004, 02:09 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 29-01-2004, 02:10 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 29-01-2004, 11:17 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Cloud - 29-01-2004, 11:41 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 30-01-2004, 02:53 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Cloud - 31-01-2004, 05:16 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Ton - 31-01-2004, 09:10 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 31-01-2004, 09:14 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Ton - 31-01-2004, 09:37 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 31-01-2004, 09:39 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Ton - 31-01-2004, 09:41 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 31-01-2004, 09:43 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Ton - 31-01-2004, 09:45 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 01-02-2004, 04:31 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 05-02-2004, 01:24 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Ton - 05-02-2004, 05:13 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 05-02-2004, 01:37 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 05-02-2004, 06:31 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 05-02-2004, 09:30 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Vahn RAmar - 06-02-2004, 01:45 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 06-02-2004, 01:47 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Vahn RAmar - 06-02-2004, 01:59 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 06-02-2004, 02:00 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 06-02-2004, 11:45 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 07-02-2004, 11:36 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 08-02-2004, 12:22 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 08-02-2004, 12:29 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 08-02-2004, 03:28 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by SupplyDroid - 08-02-2004, 04:06 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Ton - 08-02-2004, 09:12 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 13-02-2004, 09:20 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 13-02-2004, 10:08 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Sd28 - 23-02-2004, 04:16 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 23-02-2004, 05:37 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 24-02-2004, 09:41 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Ton - 25-02-2004, 06:16 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 25-02-2004, 01:27 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Beat X500 - 29-02-2004, 03:24 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 02-03-2004, 11:59 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 09-03-2004, 09:11 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Ton - 10-03-2004, 02:04 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Myune - 27-03-2004, 09:32 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Vahn RAmar - 03-04-2004, 02:12 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 03-04-2004, 04:15 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Cloud - 10-04-2004, 05:54 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Talim009 - 17-04-2004, 06:09 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 17-04-2004, 01:34 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Talim009 - 17-04-2004, 08:08 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Talim009 - 05-06-2004, 03:09 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 05-06-2004, 01:44 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Gotien - 05-06-2004, 04:53 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Sd28 - 08-06-2004, 10:31 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 09-06-2004, 01:35 AM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 09-06-2004, 09:20 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Sd28 - 09-06-2004, 10:03 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Mini_Bert - 09-06-2004, 10:53 PM
My soon to be Fanfic - by Sd28 - 11-06-2004, 10:42 AM

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