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a poem i wrote..
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15-02-2006, 02:20 AM
demeiz Wrote:im searching for salvation
im searching for an end
im searching for a life
one i comprehend

do you see the shadows
or is it only me
ive shown you all the answers
but still you cannot see

they plauge my every thought
its tearing down my mind
i see them all around me
and yet i am still blind

a terror deep within me
a secret that cannot be told
i am the only keeper
of this terrible burden
Some changes I would have made. Not to bad though.
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a poem i wrote.. - by demeiz - 13-02-2006, 10:45 PM
a poem i wrote.. - by Cye Zero - 14-02-2006, 07:10 PM
a poem i wrote.. - by demeiz - 14-02-2006, 08:26 PM
a poem i wrote.. - by Teh EkwEE - 14-02-2006, 08:29 PM
a poem i wrote.. - by demeiz - 14-02-2006, 08:37 PM
a poem i wrote.. - by Anti Hacker - 15-02-2006, 12:17 AM
a poem i wrote.. - by Double Edge - 15-02-2006, 01:41 AM
a poem i wrote.. - by Phantom_RAcast - 15-02-2006, 02:20 AM
a poem i wrote.. - by demeiz - 15-02-2006, 05:51 AM

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