My story (Chapters at a time)

[glowworm]

Here is the beginning of my story:

The clash of the mythical creatures

As the sun rose, the rays bounced off of the shimmering lake and onto the lush green grass. The golden hair of the knight known as Pyathogos dazzled passers-by as the watched him ride by on a dappled brown horse. He was wearing a silver suit of armour which caught the suns rays. The king had summoned him to do a task to save the whole town from certain death. There was not a cloud in the bright blue sky. As Pyathogos galloped to the palace gates, the guards stopped him from entering through the glittering golden gates to speak to the king. "Stop right there. What is your name and why are you here?" "The king wanted to see me and my name is Pyathogos" "Enter these gates and speak to your majesty. I'm terribly sorry, I didn't realise that you were Pyathogos." The guard scratched his head. "No problems." Replied Pyathogos.

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