01-08-2004, 10:46 PM
I am currently working on a Fanfic. I thought it'd be nice if i submitted sections at a time and then people can give me feedback on what should happen next and so on. So here goes....
Kain dived underneath the Delsaber's heavy slash and ripped through its putrid dark flesh with the dim glow of his saber, turning it dust. Out of breath and bleeding Kain wondered how much longer the rank tunnels and caverns of these ruins could go on for. The stench of mould and static in the air was unbearable. He looked around, out of a shattered glass window he could see a vast illuminated citadel. For a moment he stopped and thought about what kind of evil could of decimated a ship this size. Regaining his breath he began to pace towards the next cold door, treading the remains of his enemies and broken glass alike into the ground.
The next room was the biggest he had seen yet. A pulsating mass of seemingly 'living' wall rose from the ground in front of him. An eerie silence echoed through the cavern. In his travels Kain had learnt that any empty room on ragol doesn't normally stay that way for very long. Raising his saber to his face Kain ran towards the forming pack of Claws. Each powerful slash cut them down one by one. From behind the spine chilling noise of a Deminian resonated. Kain turned just as a huge blade like claw struck his shoulder. He was knocked down and his sword arm was badly hurt. His mag hovered faithfully by his side but depleted of charge was unable to help. Kain himself did not have enough energy to heal himself in time for an escape. He would have to find another way to fight back.
Kain dived underneath the Delsaber's heavy slash and ripped through its putrid dark flesh with the dim glow of his saber, turning it dust. Out of breath and bleeding Kain wondered how much longer the rank tunnels and caverns of these ruins could go on for. The stench of mould and static in the air was unbearable. He looked around, out of a shattered glass window he could see a vast illuminated citadel. For a moment he stopped and thought about what kind of evil could of decimated a ship this size. Regaining his breath he began to pace towards the next cold door, treading the remains of his enemies and broken glass alike into the ground.
The next room was the biggest he had seen yet. A pulsating mass of seemingly 'living' wall rose from the ground in front of him. An eerie silence echoed through the cavern. In his travels Kain had learnt that any empty room on ragol doesn't normally stay that way for very long. Raising his saber to his face Kain ran towards the forming pack of Claws. Each powerful slash cut them down one by one. From behind the spine chilling noise of a Deminian resonated. Kain turned just as a huge blade like claw struck his shoulder. He was knocked down and his sword arm was badly hurt. His mag hovered faithfully by his side but depleted of charge was unable to help. Kain himself did not have enough energy to heal himself in time for an escape. He would have to find another way to fight back.