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My Fanfic
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Kain Wrote:Well since i didn't get any messages about what should happen next i have decided to continue anyway, otherwise i will lose the flow of the story.

A drop of blood mixed with sweat trickled into Kain's mouth as he gazed up at the huge Dimenian in front of him. He prepared to take his final blow when out of the corner of his eye a shadow darted across the otherside of the room. He knew it was to swift and agile to be a beast. Then his thoughts were confirmed as a flash of lightning filled the room and the dimenians dropped like flies all around him. He leant on his blade for support and stood up to look his saviour in the eyes. In front of him loomed the imposing figure of a Force. His dark, pool like eyes almost drew attention away from his tall, slender body covered in billowing deep purple robes.
"You should be more careful next time, i wont always be around to save you".
Kain barely heard the Force's words as he drifted from pain into unconsciousness. The dark force caught Kain as he fell and conecerntrating hard, shifted them back onto pioneer 2 and the Force's home.

What Happens Next??! Give me some feedback and ideas please
once you recover from your injuries but you dont know how you got back to pioneer the nurse tells you it was a mesterious force who had just left for gal da val so you decide to follow and properlly thank your rescuer
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My Fanfic - by Kain - 01-08-2004, 10:46 PM
My Fanfic - by Kain - 01-08-2004, 10:47 PM
My Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 01-08-2004, 10:57 PM
My Fanfic - by Kain - 01-08-2004, 11:01 PM
My Fanfic - by Kain - 02-08-2004, 02:23 PM
My Fanfic - by Sd28 - 02-08-2004, 02:54 PM
My Fanfic - by Kain - 02-08-2004, 03:23 PM
My Fanfic - by BeckieV - 02-08-2004, 03:26 PM
My Fanfic - by Kain - 02-08-2004, 06:13 PM
My Fanfic - by BeckieV - 02-08-2004, 06:17 PM
My Fanfic - by Kain - 02-08-2004, 07:28 PM
My Fanfic - by BeckieV - 02-08-2004, 11:34 PM
My Fanfic - by Shifty - 03-08-2004, 12:05 AM
My Fanfic - by Kain - 03-08-2004, 09:26 AM
My Fanfic - by darkice - 03-08-2004, 10:18 AM
My Fanfic - by BeckieV - 03-08-2004, 02:43 PM
My Fanfic - by Kain - 04-08-2004, 01:07 PM
My Fanfic - by Freaky kid - 04-08-2004, 04:21 PM
My Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 07-08-2004, 08:50 PM
My Fanfic - by Kain - 10-08-2004, 09:40 PM
My Fanfic - by darkice - 10-08-2004, 09:43 PM
My Fanfic - by Sd28 - 10-08-2004, 11:47 PM
My Fanfic - by BeckieV - 11-08-2004, 12:09 AM
My Fanfic - by Sagasu - 14-08-2004, 04:49 PM
My Fanfic - by Shifty - 14-08-2004, 09:05 PM
My Fanfic - by Kain - 29-11-2004, 07:03 PM
My Fanfic - by Grave_Guardian - 29-11-2004, 11:28 PM
My Fanfic - by DarkMagician - 30-11-2004, 04:24 PM
My Fanfic - by Kain - 18-12-2004, 11:12 PM

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