03-08-2004, 12:05 AM
this is brilliant stuff, very atmospheric, im loving it.
i was thinkin, how about wen u eventually get down to the island that u get into an area where the force is completely surrounded, no tp left and the monsters are homing in for the kill, BAM kain steps in, throws over a Trifluid and together u beat these monsters.
and how about the force being a little sinister, maybe theres more to him than meets the eye. why was he in the ruins? why did he leave b4 u woke up? theres sum very cool possobilitys with this. keep writing
i was thinkin, how about wen u eventually get down to the island that u get into an area where the force is completely surrounded, no tp left and the monsters are homing in for the kill, BAM kain steps in, throws over a Trifluid and together u beat these monsters.
and how about the force being a little sinister, maybe theres more to him than meets the eye. why was he in the ruins? why did he leave b4 u woke up? theres sum very cool possobilitys with this. keep writing


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