Fan fic

[Sagasu]

I can read it ispaced some sentences so there i listned the quoted need a little help but you cn still read it.=/

Woah there, slow down.

No need to type so fast that your words jumble together like that, not to mention spelling.

If you read my above posts, they apply to the entire chapter. Hopefully you can find some use from them. Though I would like to stress my point about grammar.

Hardly a comma, or even a period for that matter, in sight!

Careful, just chose your words carefully.