27-01-2005, 02:36 PM
Er first off this is from an RPG I'm participating in. Sooo if you want to follow the whole story and read other people's posts go here - http://www.ayeka.net
I've highlighted in orange which is not my writting. I was really stuck at those points, gomen ~_~
Anyway this RPG is based in the Tenchi Universe. Evil Kiyone is my design based off the original Evil Kiyo. And Yakume is her daughter whom I made up.
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Narrator Kiyone suddenly found herself at what appeared to be Jurai at night, it was so dark she could barley make out the trees around her. She was about to step forward when a familier voice echoced from behind. Turning, she saw Tenchi standing with Yakume. Both revealed sad expressions on their face.
Kiyone: Tenchi? What's wrong? *begins to look concerned*
NarratorTenchi never changed his expression
Tenchi: I'm sorry, I can't risk it...
Kiyone: Risk what? What are talking about?
Narrator Yakume clung tightly at Tenchi's trousers. She looked scared..
Tenchi: *sighs* What happend so long ago, could become reality again. I don;t want to risk it..
Kiyone: What...?
Narrator Both of their figures began to shimmer and eventually blend in with the darkness around..
Kiyone: Tenchi! Wait! Where are you going?!
Narrator Kiyone reached out to them, but it was too late. They were gone. Kiyone looked down only to notice she had a red shadow. It slowly crept around her waist forming behind her. As soon as she heard it's voice she froze..
Dark Kiyone: About time they left... you don't need them. Not with all the power you have.
Kiyone: H..how are you real?
Dark Kiyone: I'm always there, inside you. You'll never be rid of me
Kiyone: No.... you're not me...GET AWAY FROM ME!
Narrator Kiyone swung around with her right arm, but her counter part was gone... so were the trees. Now her fear was slightly rising.. there was nothing around her, except the darkness now crawled slowly around her body. It was swallowing her up. But before it did and before she could scream........... she woke up.
Narrator Kiyone breathed heavily, she was sweating slightly from her nightmare.. just like the one she has all those years ago. Her brain told her it was just her worrying that brought the dream on, but her feeling thought otherwise.
Kiyone: *clutching her head* Ugh... what the hell was that?
Narrator Tenchi entered the room fully dressed in his casual clothes. He looked at Kiyone in concern.
Tenchi: Uh hey, did you sleep alright?
Kiyone: Umm yeah... just a bad dream that's all.
Tenchi: Alright, you need to get dressed. The Jurai ship is arriving soon.
Kiyone: *nods* Okay, I'm coming.
---later---
Yakume: Wooooooooooooooow! *looks at the huge royal Jurai ship towering above them* Dat one?!
NarratorTenchi looked down smiling
Tenchi: Yes, that's the one!
Yakume continued to gaze at it until Kiyone placed her hand on her shoulder
Kiyone: Come on honey, it's time to go.
Yakume: *giggles* ok!
Narrator All three then made their way into the ship.
I've highlighted in orange which is not my writting. I was really stuck at those points, gomen ~_~
Anyway this RPG is based in the Tenchi Universe. Evil Kiyone is my design based off the original Evil Kiyo. And Yakume is her daughter whom I made up.
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Narrator Kiyone suddenly found herself at what appeared to be Jurai at night, it was so dark she could barley make out the trees around her. She was about to step forward when a familier voice echoced from behind. Turning, she saw Tenchi standing with Yakume. Both revealed sad expressions on their face.
Kiyone: Tenchi? What's wrong? *begins to look concerned*
NarratorTenchi never changed his expression
Tenchi: I'm sorry, I can't risk it...
Kiyone: Risk what? What are talking about?
Narrator Yakume clung tightly at Tenchi's trousers. She looked scared..
Tenchi: *sighs* What happend so long ago, could become reality again. I don;t want to risk it..
Kiyone: What...?
Narrator Both of their figures began to shimmer and eventually blend in with the darkness around..
Kiyone: Tenchi! Wait! Where are you going?!
Narrator Kiyone reached out to them, but it was too late. They were gone. Kiyone looked down only to notice she had a red shadow. It slowly crept around her waist forming behind her. As soon as she heard it's voice she froze..
Dark Kiyone: About time they left... you don't need them. Not with all the power you have.
Kiyone: H..how are you real?
Dark Kiyone: I'm always there, inside you. You'll never be rid of me
Kiyone: No.... you're not me...GET AWAY FROM ME!
Narrator Kiyone swung around with her right arm, but her counter part was gone... so were the trees. Now her fear was slightly rising.. there was nothing around her, except the darkness now crawled slowly around her body. It was swallowing her up. But before it did and before she could scream........... she woke up.
Narrator Kiyone breathed heavily, she was sweating slightly from her nightmare.. just like the one she has all those years ago. Her brain told her it was just her worrying that brought the dream on, but her feeling thought otherwise.
Kiyone: *clutching her head* Ugh... what the hell was that?
Narrator Tenchi entered the room fully dressed in his casual clothes. He looked at Kiyone in concern.
Tenchi: Uh hey, did you sleep alright?
Kiyone: Umm yeah... just a bad dream that's all.
Tenchi: Alright, you need to get dressed. The Jurai ship is arriving soon.
Kiyone: *nods* Okay, I'm coming.
---later---
Yakume: Wooooooooooooooow! *looks at the huge royal Jurai ship towering above them* Dat one?!
NarratorTenchi looked down smiling
Tenchi: Yes, that's the one!
Yakume continued to gaze at it until Kiyone placed her hand on her shoulder
Kiyone: Come on honey, it's time to go.
Yakume: *giggles* ok!
Narrator All three then made their way into the ship.