My writting o_O

[Ria]

All 3 travelers walked through the long corridor to the main hall. Just before they reached it, 2 guards stood infront. Both stood up right with their weapons drawn. As
they approached the guards, the sentrys had respectfully bowed and shuffled to the sides of the hallway. Except one didn't move enough, resulting in him knocking Kiyone slightly.

Kiyone: *giving him an odd look* Excuse me?...

The guard had coldly replied, not looking her in the eye

Guard: Sorry ma'am..

Before Kiyone could react to the guards action, Tenchi grabbed her hand softly and making an attempt to pull her away from the guard.

Tenchi: *lightly smiled * Come on Kiyone, lets continue

Kiyone looked at him for a brief second and acknowlaged his gensture to move away. How could she resist those eyes of his? Everytime she looked into his pupils, her heart sank deep into her chest.

Kiyone: *gave a shy smile* Ok.........darling

Tenchi couldn't help but blush slightly from that comment, almost anything word she spoke to him made him turn red in embarrasement. After a brief pause, the couple and their child contiuned to walk forward.

Once they arrived in the main hall, all were stunned by it's size. The gushing rivers and the rich plants seemed to spread endlessly. Yakume couldn't contain herself and ran straight into a mass of shimmering roses. Her voice was filled with pure excitement as she crawled though the larger than herself plant life. Kiyone and Tenchi couldn't help but smile at her childish antics.

Tenchi: I'll never get tired of this..

Kiyone turned her eyes towards him still smiling

Kiyone: *smiles* Yeah. Like a little angel

Tenchi: *turns towards her* How about you spend some time with her whilst I discuss the arrangments with Misaki?

Kiyone: *nodded* Sure, I'll see you later then..

Kiyone then cocked her head to the side, giving him a seductive wink. Tenchi caught on to what she ment, resulting in another blush.

Tenchi: A..alright, take care!

Tenchi and one of the guards made their way to the bridge of the ship. Meanwhile Kiyone and Yakume were spending time together in a small cove of tiny flowers. As Kiyone was wrapping her arms around her in a protective love way, Yakume picked numerous types and started making a flower chain.

Yakume: *turning her head slightly around* Look mommy!

Kiyone gave a slighlt giggle. She'd never thought eariler in her life would she would feel this way. Kiyone was really starting to get into this mother role now.

Kiyone: Is that for mommy?

Yakume nods with a bright smile on her face. Kiyone gave a light giggle as she pulled her hair up, allowing Yakume to neatly place it over her.

Kiyone gave Yakume's head a few strokes giving her praise

Kiyone: *smiling* Thank you. You're very skillful for your age.

Yakume cringed and giggled with embarissment, taking the praise to heart.

Yakume: It looks pwetty on you!

Kiyone: *smiling* Thank you hunny


Yakume couldn't contain herself any longer. So much lust for expressing her love towards her mother, she just had to show it! Yakume literally dived into Kiyone's stomach almost catching Kiyone by suprise, giving her an affenctionate huggle whilst nuzling her head into her belly

Yakume: Hehe, I wuv you mommy!


Kiyone embraced her child against her. She had realized that this moment is one of those priceless moments which demostrates what life is all about. A tearful sparkle formed in the corner of her eye and a second later it streamed down the side of her. The tear clutched the rim of her jawline for the next few seconds and then released, crashing down ever so lightly onto little Yakume's head.

Yakume looked up at her mother with a concerned look

Yakume: Whats wrong, mommy?

Kiyone smiled happily down at her child

Kiyone: Nothing is wrong, you make me so happy. I don't know what I would do if I were to ever lose you. My precious daughter...

Yakume wasn't familier with the word "precious", but clearly understood what her mother was saying. Her eyes shut tight, cringing from the praise yet again. Then she looked up deep into her mother's blue eyes, still holding that big smile on her face.

Yakume: What does pw... pwesu..

Kiyone: Precious mean?

Yakume bit her finger lightly nodding

Kiyone smiled as she placed her hand around Yakume's cheek, stroking it softly

Kiyone: Well... it means that I value you alot and I love you more than anything honey.

Yakume: Oooooh ok. You.. pwe.. pwec..

Kiyone looked at ever so softly as Yakume attempted to prenounce it.

Kiyone: You're doing great, you'll soon be talking perfectly.

Yakume polietly stuck her tongue out giggling lightly

Kiyone looked at her watch, it read 18.00hr

Kiyone: Well I think we should get you to bed, alright?

Yakume frowned in the cutest way imaginable. She looked down sulking, her mind was set on having more fun and exploring more of the huge garden.

Yakume: Awwww.... do I have to mommy?

Kiyone gave a weak smile but effectionate enough to appear happy.

Kiyone: You're a growing girl, you need to go to bed early honey. *smiles* ok?

Yakume looked up innocently. Her little finger was halfway in the mouth, then let out a small squeak.

Yakume: Ok mommy..

After, Yakume rubbed her eyes indicating that she was slowly getting drowzy. Kiyone shuffled forward and picked her up as if she was a newborn. Her child followed up by smiling weakly, it always warmed her little heart to be in mommy's arms. Kiyone lowerd her face towards her smiling