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Rise through the Ranks
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Here is the beging. Hope u like it. I try my best.


Chapter 1: Realizing
In a dark room where none could see a lone figured started to stir on the ground.
“Damn does my head hurt. What the hell happened to me? Last thing I remember was……well I don’t really remember anything but wanting to get revenge. And being really pissed off” As the figure arose it was looking around. “Where in the hell I am I.”
A ghostly figure came out of the air holding a huge scythe. “Good observation, you will serve me well in my army.”
The figure dazed with confutation. “And who in the living hell are? What army? And again, where am I damn it?”
The cloaked figure look surprised but smiled and said. “I am your living nightmare. My army and you may not what to know.”
Shocked with anger, he went for his own scythe. “All right you want it that way eh? Bring it…… what the hell?? Where the fu** is my scythe?”
“Looking for this?” The ghostly figure pulled out his scythe. “Now, would like answers to your questions?”
“Yes I bloody well would.”
The figure came closer, growing with ever step. “You are in hell, I am the Grim Reaper and it is my army of the Undead.”
“Right and you expect me buy into this shit? You have to prove it to me first. Good luck with that though, I am outa here, wherever here is.”
As he turned to leave the earth started to shake under his feet. Soon boney hands were rising from the ground all around him. “So far he’s doing a not bad job.” He said as he trying to find a gap to run through. All the while more hands were sticking out of the ground while the first ones were starting to rise up. Out they came, jumping into the air only to land on their feet with a rattle of bones. There were ten altogether.
He turned to the one who claimed he was the Grim Reaper. “I don’t know what they are going to do, they have no heads. Plus they aren’t even armed, nice army, I could take them with my bare hands.”
“Oh they cam do plenty.” Just them a swarm of skulls flew in from nowhere. One by one they landed one a skeleton body. As they did a sword and shield arose from the ground by their feet, the skeletons each took their own and assumed a ready stance.
“This could be trouble.”
Clank He turned to see his scythe laying beside him.
“Take it you may need it.” The Reaper called from behind him.
“That was your biggest mistake so far,”
In a flash movement he bent grabbed his scythe and took down the closest skeleton fight.
“You are faster then I had thought. Get him.” He pointed at him, a hand come out from the cloak, but there was no flesh, nor blood, just done.
As the Reaper finished his sentence the skeletons started to attack.


Just a start. Heh heh, any more ideas?
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Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 01-02-2005, 10:33 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Deadly Zero - 03-02-2005, 02:29 AM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 03-02-2005, 03:25 AM
Rise through the Ranks - by Deadly Zero - 03-02-2005, 03:51 AM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 03-02-2005, 06:45 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 04-02-2005, 07:47 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by DARKMATTER - 04-02-2005, 07:52 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 04-02-2005, 07:53 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Deadly Zero - 05-02-2005, 03:44 AM
Rise through the Ranks - by Ria - 05-02-2005, 04:01 AM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 05-02-2005, 02:56 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Deadly Zero - 05-02-2005, 09:14 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 06-02-2005, 12:40 AM
Rise through the Ranks - by Deadly Zero - 06-02-2005, 01:31 AM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 07-02-2005, 01:37 AM
Rise through the Ranks - by Deadly Zero - 07-02-2005, 02:31 AM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 07-02-2005, 06:47 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Deadly Zero - 08-02-2005, 06:19 AM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 08-02-2005, 10:44 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 08-02-2005, 10:45 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 11-02-2005, 07:02 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 11-02-2005, 07:02 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Deadly Zero - 12-02-2005, 01:41 AM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 14-02-2005, 07:22 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by DARKMATTER - 14-02-2005, 08:56 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by zero132132 - 14-02-2005, 09:10 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 15-02-2005, 01:23 AM
Rise through the Ranks - by Deadly Zero - 15-02-2005, 01:27 AM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 18-02-2005, 08:10 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 18-02-2005, 08:11 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 18-02-2005, 08:13 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by zero132132 - 18-02-2005, 09:27 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Poo Fly - 21-02-2005, 03:41 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Deadly Zero - 21-02-2005, 03:55 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 23-02-2005, 07:39 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 23-02-2005, 07:41 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 23-02-2005, 07:42 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 23-02-2005, 07:43 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by zero132132 - 23-02-2005, 09:08 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by Grave_Guardian - 23-02-2005, 10:06 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by zero132132 - 24-02-2005, 09:17 PM
Rise through the Ranks - by DARKMATTER - 08-02-2005, 03:51 PM

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