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I figured I would indulge myself just this once and double post.
Here's the poem that I said I would put up.
Love is a bottomless pit,
once you fall there's no going back.
As I fell, I dropped a solitary man,
She didn't fell the same.
For what felt like an eternity,
I thought she was there too.
But when I finally awoke,
I found myself falling alone.
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Wren - lvl 82 Skyly - FOnewm
Awesome Items I have: Mostly just my fully ground Red Saber.
Quote of the Moment: "Life is indeed darkness save when there is urge, and all urge is blind save when there is knowledge, and all knowledge is vain save when there is work, and all work is empty save when there is love." - Gibran, Kahlil
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Hey I like 'em all so far. Great poetic talent, methinks. Keep going!
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Now that it's completely over between me and my gf I can post this poem without feeling too bad. I wrote this ironically the day before she broke up with me.
Quote:A voice rises above the rest,
beckoning me to look.
I turn around and see her,
A blue-eyed blond-haired goddess.
She looks in my eyes,
I look in hers.
She continues singing,
just the same as before.
But there is something different,
now I know she's singing to me.
PSO characters
G2- lvl 99 Greenill - RAmar
Zero- lvl 114 Redria - HUcast
Wren - lvl 82 Skyly - FOnewm
Awesome Items I have: Mostly just my fully ground Red Saber.
Quote of the Moment: "Life is indeed darkness save when there is urge, and all urge is blind save when there is knowledge, and all knowledge is vain save when there is work, and all work is empty save when there is love." - Gibran, Kahlil
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you kill me, pearly eye
i dont want you yet you make me live
i caint stop staring, pearly eye
you make me get up in the morning, go to sleep in the night.
you are my one and only, pearly eye
i use you every day, i dont deserve you
i sit back and smoke you, my pearly eye
i see that you have ruined my life, pearly eye
{crack}
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Heres a poem I made in 5 minutes last night to make you laugh Zero....
I see your face, for but a brief moment
Oh how I long to stand in this moment forever
For your presence fills me with glee
But with that glee also comes a sickning feeling
What is this feeling that I feel?
That makes me feel like I can float
But makes me cry, it hurts so much
That makes my heart beat ever faster
But also impales it as if a javilin
What is this feeling that I feel?
Love, of course- get used to it- Foreshadow
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Did it make you laugh.... It made my friend laugh, so I figured you'd like it too...
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Didn't make me laugh but it was a great poem.
PSO characters
G2- lvl 99 Greenill - RAmar
Zero- lvl 114 Redria - HUcast
Wren - lvl 82 Skyly - FOnewm
Awesome Items I have: Mostly just my fully ground Red Saber.
Quote of the Moment: "Life is indeed darkness save when there is urge, and all urge is blind save when there is knowledge, and all knowledge is vain save when there is work, and all work is empty save when there is love." - Gibran, Kahlil
Posts: 821
Threads: 25
Joined: Mar 2005
Durn.... oh well.... I tried........
I'll post another poem later... right now my friend is erging me to play C.A.R.D with him....
