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Aurora Block
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01-10-2004, 06:07 PM
The coffee stuff was supposed to represent how my mother likes her coffee. Espresso, no milk, no sugar. Put milk in that and you get one unhappy mother.
On topic: hehehehe, Inner Asshole...
Everything happens for a reason.
mimas' main characters: Rydia, lv171 RAcaseal Anguirel, lv177 FOmarl Asavar Kul, lv34 RAcast 
02-10-2004, 08:36 AM
ok!?!? anyways i did not know you mother doesent like coffee with milk
 now lets get back on topic and i really think its good why dont you mimas?
02-10-2004, 11:19 AM
ehh. I think a good humour story is good but it's getting a bit cute for my tastes, from the look of it. Not to say that it's a bad story so far, by any means, I just think it needs a bit of a darker touch.
Everything happens for a reason.
mimas' main characters: Rydia, lv171 RAcaseal Anguirel, lv177 FOmarl Asavar Kul, lv34 RAcast
02-10-2004, 01:15 PM
ok its good to tell her so she knows what to improve and what to take away!
02-10-2004, 05:25 PM
Let's just hope that Feline Witch reads the comments when she gets back...
Everything happens for a reason.
mimas' main characters: Rydia, lv171 RAcaseal Anguirel, lv177 FOmarl Asavar Kul, lv34 RAcast 
10-10-2004, 05:08 PM
Its a really good story, everything kinda fits together....but....it just needs that one thing to make it perfect. Good Job!
*EDIT* Oh, some action, u know, battles on ragol and stuff would be good too 
![[Image: coollogo_com_3170238.jpg]](http://www.geocities.com/nazgul_blade11/coollogo_com_3170238.jpg) I Am The Master Of PSO Gao Than: lvl 100 RAcast Redria | PSO Episode Three Info Kitty: lvl 10 HUnewearl Bluefill | Morishisu: Heroes, Clv 1 RAmar Bluefill Nazgul: lvl 16 FOmar Pinkal | Hiroyuki: Arkz, Clv 1 FOmar Skyly Fei Lin: lvl 31 FOmarl Whitill Moritshisu: lvl 28 RAmar Whitill Ashley: lvl 21 RAmarl Purplenum Lord Chaos: lvl 10 HUmar Oran Sil'Fer: lvl 8 HUnewearl Viridia
11-10-2004, 07:33 AM
hope she gets back soon shes on a vacation or something like that.
12-10-2004, 12:26 AM
Yeah, i need more sections
I Am The Master Of PSO Gao Than: lvl 100 RAcast Redria | PSO Episode Three Info Kitty: lvl 10 HUnewearl Bluefill | Morishisu: Heroes, Clv 1 RAmar Bluefill Nazgul: lvl 16 FOmar Pinkal | Hiroyuki: Arkz, Clv 1 FOmar Skyly Fei Lin: lvl 31 FOmarl Whitill Moritshisu: lvl 28 RAmar Whitill Ashley: lvl 21 RAmarl Purplenum Lord Chaos: lvl 10 HUmar Oran Sil'Fer: lvl 8 HUnewearl Viridia 
12-10-2004, 12:38 AM
Gao Than Wrote:Its a really good story, everything kinda fits together....but....it just needs that one thing to make it perfect. Good Job! You stole the words outa my mouth... NOW GIVE EM BACK ![[Image: p5700430.gif]](http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v619/SC-cOoLdUdE/p5700430.gif)
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