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-.- *sighs*The story just needs some momentum?

its ok but not good

Okay, lemme write it Vahn and everyone will go "Oh yeah thats sweet!", or maybe they'd say, "Oh come on....that STINKS!"

WARNING! THIS NEST POST IS SPAM... SORTA. I SUGGEST THE FAINT OF HEART, AND THE FAINT OF BUTT, TO SKIP THIS POST!

Or mabey they would go like this: AALLLOOOOAAAPPP!


But seroiusly, what should I do?

Dude, I told you, let ME write it. I'm j/king of course, I stink at that!

either learn to write intrsting storys or steal someone else storys and call them urs

lol vahn this isn't really what u wanted huh?

I pine for you...Oh theres something new a homestarrunner go check it out, if you can find it.

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Quote:Originally posted by Phantom_RAcast
either learn to write intrsting storys or steal someone else storys and call them urs

Yeah, yeah real nice.

I added on a new chapter.

Honestly you should see some of the bull crap on the site.

the third chapters kind of short

Bah, It' would have been longer if I hadn't taken out the stupid part.