26-11-2003, 02:22 AM
27-11-2003, 02:37 AM
ahhh... it was bad enof with the 2 of you.. try not to asist them in thir constent bicering
27-11-2003, 02:49 AM
^ Yes, it got worse with three, and now four from Washington!
Ahem.
Any way, fourth chapter is up. Two hours of writing and three pages to show for it. Hope you like it.
Ahem.
Any way, fourth chapter is up. Two hours of writing and three pages to show for it. Hope you like it.
27-11-2003, 08:12 AM
The fourth chapters pretty good. Lets say........ -10000000 out of 10. JK. But how u introduced Ton, you made me look bad.
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Trainin a skyly, trying to get it to lv20
Character Stats:
TON:lv59:greennill:humar:yamato
X:lv 23:yellowboze:ramar:varista
T0n:lv7
kyly:humar:daggers
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Trainin a skyly, trying to get it to lv20
Character Stats:
TON:lv59:greennill:humar:yamato
X:lv 23:yellowboze:ramar:varista
T0n:lv7
kyly:humar:daggers __________________
27-11-2003, 10:56 PM
Not a bad story, I should have looked at it earlier, I wish I was in it though, if u ever get around to writing some more try to put me in, or at least put one of the mods in, just don't put kyros in, that'll go straight to his head.
28-11-2003, 10:25 PM
Lol, more, I'm planning to make a series outta this! not the same story line of course.
28-11-2003, 10:30 PM
Quote:Originally posted by Vahn RAmar
Lol, more, I'm planning to make a series outta this! not the same story line of course.
Cool, Can I be in it?
29-11-2003, 12:43 AM
Otay, what the heck is going on? First its blowin' holes in people head then making Ton looking better then he really is(
) making ME look bad(
) and then computers! Not bad though for yourself.
) making ME look bad(
) and then computers! Not bad though for yourself.29-11-2003, 02:05 AM
Quote:Originally posted by Issac
Otay, what the heck is going on? First its blowin' holes in people head then making Ton looking better then he really is() making ME look bad(
) and then computers! Not bad though for yourself.
Ya know I bet if I was in the story I'd be written a lot weaker than I really am, which wouldn't be a suprise becase I'm higher lvled than Vahn and he can't have that now can he:p
29-11-2003, 07:51 AM
Lol, I'm higher than him and in the fanfic I'm higher. Vahn just has supernatural powers in the fanfic. He's a soul something or another...