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Chaos, The Fallen One
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09-07-2005, 11:11 AM
Really good, I love the way you have used logs like a kind of diary entry, many famous noves use this technique (The woman in white, cure you english lit!)

I think this could go really well, try to research some wider vocabulary and you have it in the bag.
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Chaos, The Fallen One - by Sephiroth Now - 09-07-2005, 07:05 AM
Chaos, The Fallen One - by Lee Xao Vue - 09-07-2005, 07:13 AM
Chaos, The Fallen One - by Sephiroth Now - 09-07-2005, 07:16 AM
Chaos, The Fallen One - by Anti Hacker - 09-07-2005, 11:11 AM
Chaos, The Fallen One - by Querytansytt - 09-07-2005, 01:36 PM
Chaos, The Fallen One - by Sephiroth Now - 09-07-2005, 08:50 PM

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