BRAND NEW FanFic: The Chronicles of Coral: Exodus Dawn

[Azbats]

Not much has changed from my origional opinion on your work.

Though do expect no mercy from me when we get to the parts I have not yet had the pleasure of seeing.

I knew that already... mercy isn't a word in your vocab

But seriously, you know how much I appreciate your feedback, and as you can see I have actually changed aspects of the ending based on your past critique [works both ways you see ] and suggestions.

By the way people Sagasu himself is an EXCELLENT writer and I [and you too ] will be extreemly glad when he posts some pieces on this forum. Hopefully the sooner the better